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With the development of technology, online shopping has been agreed by more and more people and now has become a fashion. Many things have pros and cons, and online shopping is not an exception. On the positive beside, first of all, people go shopping online can save much time to do something else. What's more, people can find more things than real shops and can compare their price to decide to buy which one. Last but not least, online shopping can breake out the restriction of area, people can buy something which in remote places. On the negative beside, there is something fake online. If you don't focus to them, you will buy something fake.Then if you buy something that further than where you are lived, you may to spend some time in waiting it. In my opinion, it is very convenient for modern people, but some problems still exist. So I think the government should improve the relate legal and the consumers should more concern when you do shopping online.
