2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例。

In China,there is a beautiful city,that my hometown-HeiHe.So,I will take you to see it. My hometown is a small town,there is a HeiLongJiang River.It next to Russia,so in my hometown,you can catch sight of a lots of Russian,they are so friendly,you can become friend with them. In my hometown,in spring,it will has a large of flowers and trees.So,it looks very good.And in winter,the snow from sky to down.