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I'm very happy to see you will come to my hometown. i want to take you to the huanghelou.it is a famous place in my town-wuhan.the huanghelou which is placed in the side of changjiang.it has many many years history.we always think huanghelou is one of the four famous buliding. the tall of it is three high