2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；可增加从句和复杂句的使用；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误。

Nowadays,pollution problems,unhealth information are creeping up on student's campus life,so it's of great importance to creat a green campus.Undoubtedly we're supposed to creat a green environment as well as a green Internet. In order to creat a green campus for students,we should mainly take two measures.On the one hand,planting trees is the most advisable ways to green the campus,not only the air will be fresh,but also it's pleasant to see campus surrounded by green trees,thus creating a comfortable learning environment for students.On the other hand,managing computer systems is the most useful methods to prevent harmful information from students,with adequate education online and healthy Internet information resources,student can surely enjoy a green Internet environment. In short ,only creat a green campus can student learn better,grow better and have a better life in school.