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Dear friends, I am so excited that you will come to China and spend the Mid-autumn Day in here. Let me tell you something about the holiday in China. The Mis-autumn Day is a tradiontion featival in China. On that day, families will get together,and having a big dinner. The dinners are always delicious. After the dinner, we will sit in a circle outside the door. We always eat mooncake with some candies. From now on, the moon is the biggest in a year. Afterwards, we will look the moon until mid night......Everyone wants to fall asleep.