单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;简单句偏多了;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
I have a friend. His name is Xulin. His my middle school classmate. He is a very big fat guy, but he is very clever and funny. He likes playing football every afternoon. And he also likes playing go. We are play go every sunday. When he wins the go, he always makes a face to me. So it will make me very unhappy.