文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
I have a friend. His name is Xulin. His my middle school classmate. He is a very big fat guy, but he is very clever and funny. He likes playing football every afternoon. He also likes playing chess. We are play chess every Sunday. When he wins the chess, he always makes a face to me. So it will make me very unhappy.