单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
I have a friend. His name is Xulin. His my middle school classmate. He is a very big fat guy, but he is very clever and funny. He likes playing football every afternoon. He also likes playing chess. We are playing chess every Sunday. When he wins the chess, he always makes a face to me. So it will make me very unhappy.