单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
I have a friend. His name is Xulin. His my middle school classmate. He is a very big fat guy, but he is very clever and funny. He likes playing football each afternoon. He also likes playing chess. We are playing chess every Sunday. When he wins chess, he always makes a face to me. So it will make me very unhappy.