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In the fast—paced society，we can see advertisements everywhere.Advertising，undoubtedly，has become a major means of propaganda.It is reported that over 80% of people purchase commodities for advertising. The issue of whether advertising is beneficial or harmful has aroused considerable controversy.The supporters claim that advertisements assist people in getting understanding of products,choosing more suitable commodities and avoiding costing them more energy in choose.Others，however，argue that advertisements sometimes are misleading，exert unfavorable influence on people psychology as well as threaten people’s health. Weighing both the merits and demerits of advertisements，I claim that the benefits created by advertising for outweigh the disadvantages.The reasons for my view mainly line in the following three aspects.Firstly,advertisements provide us with the information about the latest products on the markets.generally，customers can make shopping more economical with the help of advertisements.secondly，some advertisements can motivate people to contribute to charities. To sum up，taking into account all the relevant factors that affect and contribute to this attitude，we can easily conclude that advertisements facilitate our life.
