高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；文中能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。

Living in an age when the adolescents are lack of necessary guidance and supervision, we can never fail to figure out the fact that the teengers' self-discipline is decreasing. Under this circusmtance, some have incivilization action. For example, some young people always speak loudly at public areas, such as at cinema and on the bus. On addition, we usually see some residentants pull dogs which pee every in the house estate.All of these have risen the negative affection and make arround people have bad emotion, the most important is that it is not good for our environment. So improve people' quality is critical.