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Nowadays,pollution problems,unhealthy information are creeping up on student's campus life,so it is of great importance to create a green campus.Undoubtedly we're supposed to create a green environment as well as a green Internet. In order to create a green campus for students,we should mainly take two measures.On the one hand,planting trees is the one of the advisable ways to beauty the campus,not only the air will be fresh,but also it's pleasant to see campus surrounded by green trees,thus creating a comfortable learning environment for students.On the other hand,managing computer systems is the most useful methods to prevent harmful information from students,with adequate education online and healthy Internet information resources,student can surely enjoy a green Internet environment. In short ,only create a green campus can student learn better,grow better and have a better life in school.