高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇，在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一些

Living in an age when the adolescents are lack of necessary guidance and supervision, we can never fail to figure out the fact that the teenagers' self-discipline is decreasing. Under this circumstance, some have incivilization action. For example, some young people always speak loudly at public areas, such as at cinema and on the bus. On addition, we usually see some residents pull dogs which pee everywhere in the house estate.All of these have risen the negative affection and make around people have bad emotion, the most important is that it is not good for our environment. So improve people's quality is crucial somuch.