高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高，高级词汇的积累上也要再接再厉。

Living in an age when the adolescents are lack of necessary guidance and supervision, we can never fail to figure out the fact that the teenagers' self-discipline is decreasing. Under this circumstance, some have incivilization action. For example, some young people always speak loudly at public areas, such as at cinema and on the bus. On addition, we usually see some residents pull dogs which pee everywhere in the house estate.All of these have risen the negative affection and make around people have bad emotion, the most important is that it is not good for our environment. So improve people's quality is crucial so much.