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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦157:应聘信

发布时间:2015-08-28 16:12浏览次数:1273
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根据招聘广告和简历内容,假设您就是张平。以电子邮件形式发出一封超过80词的应聘信,对您本人优势要适当扩展。开头已给出,请在落款处加上“your faithfully, Zhang Ping”.(10分)
Building Engineer Needed
Graduated in famous university
Good at computerAge:25-35
Excellent English
One year’s experience
Xixi Building Company Ltd.
E-mail: xixibc@sohu.com.cn
 
Zhang PingAge:25
Graduated in Zhejiang University
English: CET 6(6级)
Hobby: computer games and sports
Practiced one month in a company
Tel:010-85898866

E-mail: zhangping@yahoo.com 



Send to xixibc@sohu.com.cn
Dear sir,
用户的作文(系统评分60.5分
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正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

Dear Sir, My name is Zhang Ping. I’m 25. I graduated in a famous university-Zhejiang University. I was a top student in my college. My English level is 6 degree (I have passed the English Examination of 6 degree) and I like spoken English. I like computer games very much so I’m good at computer. I like sports and I’m healthy and strong. I haven’t got one year’s experience but I practiced for a month in a company. I think I am able to do the job very well. I will be very pleased if I have a chance to work in your company. My telephone number is 010-85898866 and my e-mail is zhangping@yahoo.com. Your faithfully, Zhang Ping

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