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Welcome to our country. It is the most famous that the Great wall in china.Every year,thousands of foreign people go there to visit.So,i will take you to visit it. The Great Wall has a long history,it shows chiese ancient people's intelligence.At that times,in order to built The Great Wall,Qingshihuang take so many people and plenty of money on it. in the past,built it is in order to pretect our country and against the .nowaday,The Great Wall is not only prevent other people ,but provide tourist to visit.it has beautiful seneries and wide view . In short,The Geat Wall is a present of our country.
