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可适当增加几条从句；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。
Every coin has two sides.Nowadays people do something have no concepet in nature and sioety,so plants and annimals have been less and less. That is to say we should do something with what we will do. In my opinion we do everything must think about influence,of course firstly the most important we may realize that is to protect our environment what's more we must avoid wasting sourse and energy,in the meantime in order to improve our soiety becoming more and more boom and strong we'd better try our best to do our limitation. It is because what we firstly think about that make a decision of things be like. I can do what I can to protect our plants and animals, for they are the same as my relitives. In some way I can turn off the faucet when I use up water and the moment I leave house I could turn off the light.. and so on I can you can everyone can... As long as we concern about the relationship between us and nature we will build a beautiful soiety and a better environment It's called ' The house of us'.
