全文结构较为严谨;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;文章词汇表达不够丰富,在拼写方面也要继续努力。
Hanzhou is a beautiful city,when you come here,you must go to nanshang road.The nanshang road is near the xihu lake.There are many large trees besides the road.In spring and summary,when you walk in the road,you will like in a forest.In a autumn,the leaves falls down by wind,it is romantic.In winter,it only left a bared tree trunks,the warm sunshine go though the tree,you can see the blue sky.