2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；高级词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇量稍小；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句。

It happened several years ago about the financial crisis also affect the global imbalances including such factors as economic growth,financial deepening and capital flow, On the whole, global economic imbalance is because of Asian countries which fast developing have a diverse range of economic growth rates meanwhile Americal,s financial markets come about asymmetry.