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文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。
Every coin has two sides.Nowadays people do something have no concept in nature and soiety,so plants and animals have been less and less. That is to say we should do something with what we will do. In my opinion we do everything must think about influence,of course firstly the most important we may realize that is to protect our environment what's more we must avoid wasting sourse and energy,in the meantime in order to improve our soiety becoming more and more boom and strong we'd better try our best to do our limitation. It is because what we firstly think about that make a decision of things be like. I can do what I can to protect our plants and animals, for they are the same as my relitives. In some way I can turn off the faucet when I use up water and the moment I go out of house I could turn off the light.. and so on I can you can everyone can... As long as we concern about the relationship between us and nature we will build a beautiful soiety and a better environment It is called ' The house of us'.
