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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

发布时间:2013-07-04 15:28浏览次数:3579
要求:

The pie chart below gives information about  the fast food preferences of teenagers in the USA.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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文章词汇使用比较恰当,高级词汇积累不足;全文结构较为严谨;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,fast food has flooded in our lives especially among teenagers and workers.People always be inclined to choose fast food because they don’t have any energy to make food.otherwise,the fashion of fast food are affecting people’s lives. First of all,fast food is very fast and convenient. People can stuff themselves within several minutes.in this way.They can save more time to work or do other things.At this point,fast food do save a lot of time in this fast—changing world.Secondly,in other hand,in terms of nutrition,fast food is far from satisfactory.It usually dose not compose a balanced diet and is low in nutritional value.Thus,doctors suggest that people,especially children,eat fast food as little as possible.No one can deny the fact that fast food cause great harm to people’s health.More and more,fast food have too many calories to make people fat. Now,these problems are more and more frequently discussed in people’s daily life.Some are for it but others are not.All in all, if we can take some measures like increasing fast food’s nutritional value,we will find abalance between these problems.thus,we can except a better life.

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