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作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；全文结构较为严谨；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误。
Dear Tim Hello,Tim,how are you going? I am so happy to hear that you are going to my hometown.Next,I would like to introduce the most beautiful place that would make you surprised,I bet that you must like it. As a matter of fact,in spite of it is not a famous place,it is the place I like most whenever what happened. It is a nice sea with a big beach that brings me up.It looks very mysterious when the son arises from the horizon,and you can walk in the beach,collect the shells ,seize crabs, enjoy the touch of the sun shine,what's more, you can also bring your swimming suit to play with waves or surfing. It this all over?Of cource no.There are more funny things we can do. After the ebb,you can find many kind of marine products that is very delicious when you dig them out,you can see the fishes swimming around you,but they are too flexible to catch them.when you are so tired that you feel hungry,I will bring you to my home and invite you to taste the delicious sea food! Do you move ?Let's start a nice trip.
