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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5946
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

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Along with the modelization big cities become noisy and air poluted living places. Thus some people suggested living in a rural area would be better than living in urban area. Living in rural area assist us to have a health and leisure life. Leaving away from fast life style and high work presure, breathing clean air and enjoying beauty of nature. Imagining those scenes of living in rural area makes it seems so comfortable to be everyone's dream of life. However, it wouldn't be an appropraite choice of someone would want make great achievements or big contributions in his or her life. Big cities, where cooperation and efficience of production are thought highly of, would be the best living area for someone devoted to making big difference on technical and economic development. In conclusion, I think living urban area would be the best for who keens to be productive in his or her life. On the flip side, living rural area would be the best choice for someone who care leisure and comforts most.

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