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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17430
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
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学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;缺少组织,上下文衔接稍显不流畅;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习。

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Computer and Man Can everybody can imagine one day without a computer? Yes, just one day. Perhaps most of you will just smile and say :"Oh, you can not be more serious". That is the situation of computers today. Nowadays, some people even feel unsafe when they go out for a cup of coffee during the break time from the work. So what happened between computer and man? Does the God arrange this hi-tech products to control our lives, or instead of us to handle with the earth in the future? Why we pay such important attention to computers? Many questions still need our responses. But from my point of view, before answering these questions, the most essential thing for us is to know the objective and reasonable relationship between computer and man. I consider the relationship should be friendly and moderate. People can not just indulge themsleves too much in the virtual world that computers create for them. we

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