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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8971
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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用高级词汇

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It Is Unwise to Judge a Person by Their Appearance It is common phenomena that we often judge a person by his or her appearance which can be understandable but also unwise. The reason that leads to this unwise act can be listed as followings. To begin with, a person who is with fine appearance can be more welcome and is usually considered as more excellent. So when people meet with a person t who is ugly or in bad shape, they will judge him or her too quickly and subjectively. What’s more , as the popular saying goes, “Every person loves beauty”. Hence people may have no good feeling of people who are not beautiful or handsome. However, this could be false and hurtful if we just judge a person simply through his or her appearance . Jack Ma , a successful man in the world who could say that is not in good appearance, is absolutely respectful in the world . He is not only strong but also powerful .In order to achieve his dream ,he spares no efforts to try anything that can approach to the way to his dream and he never give up when he meets with a lot of difficulties. He deserves our respect and praise. In conclusion, we should never judge a person by his or her appearance. Instead, we are supposed  

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