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字数:300 满分:100分
高级词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次较为清晰。
Saving money Recently there is a heated topic on whether students should save money or not. Opinions vary widely .Some people think that saving money is a good choice for students.However,others think that saving money may not make us a smart consumer. As far as I am concerned. I believe that it is necessary for student to save money.The reasons are as fallows.Firstly, most of us are still development on our parents for supports,saving money can reduce the burden of parents to a certain extent. Secondly, frugality has always been the traditional virtual of Chinese people,we should fallow this fine tradition.Last but not least, saving money can bring us a sense of security,and to avoid excessive consumption. From what has been discussed above,we may reasonably draw the conclusion that saving money not does more harm than good.