拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;文章衔接手法恰当;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短。
There is a phenomenon that plenty of people jump to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something. It is unwise for people to do so.Why?The reasons can be listed as follows. The first,when you are hearing something from others,you will have your own opinions.Then you may get a conclusion immediately.Have you realized that you just know a little about the thing.Secondly,there are always several aspects in everything.What you have saw and heard are just one or two aspects of the thing.You are able to get a wrong conclusion when you know anything of it.The last but not least,everyone has everyone's own ideas,therefore,you should ask for others' opinions before you get conclusions. What we should do to make us more wisely?The most important thing is that we ought to know about every aspect of the thing before we judge something.Sometimes,it is useful to take others' ideas.In all,it is high time for us to pay more attention to what we see or hear.
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