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Should college students hire cleaners According to a recent report, six university students hired cleaners to clean their dormitory and do laundry for them every week. Some people think that college students hire cleaners are reasonable, for it can save time for their study. But most of people don't support it. Their reason is that it may cause students a life idiot. As far as I am concerned. I believe that college students shouldn't hire cleaners. My reasons are as fallows. Firstly of all, the money they pay for the cleaners probably come from their parents, it adds family a sum of the extra spending virtually. Moreover, it may lead to compare unrealistically, and it is not conducive to the psychological development of students. Lastly, university provides students a platform to be independent. They will be difficult to adopt to the society if they are not independent. In short, just as the saying goes:"A house is not, how to sweep the world." As the result, students should do cleaning as far as possible themselves.
