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Currently,there lots of controvercy over that whether too many tourists may bring harm to the environment.However,on this issue,people's opinions differ sharply.Some individuals hold that amounts of tourists will bring irreparable damage to local environment.While some others believe that tourism will promote local economic development, improve the living standard of the locals.When it comes to me,the appropriate development of tourism, maintain a balance between economic development and environmental protection, is the only way to achieve sustainable development. To begin with,Tourism can promote the economic development. If the local tourists, the tourists in the local consumption will be more. Large Numbers of tourists will promote the local service industry, transportation industry, the development of food industry.Futhermore,Tourism industry belongs to the third industry, bring many job opportunities. People in many places because knowledge and degree is low, unable to get higher wages and sound life is very poor. Tourism can change the status quo, improve their income. To summary, developing tourism for local not do more harm than good. Of course, on the other hand, at the same time in the development of tourism should pay attention to protect the environment, not damage the environment in order to develop economy. Only in this way can made the progress of economy.
