2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

文中词汇表达较恰当，高级词汇表达灵活；从句使用稍显不足，注意个别句子错误；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。

In our time age, environmental scientists, state workers and the residents of a city draw attention to the environment related policies. Some scientists assert that we aresink into poverty-stricken which environmental problems can only be solved by government,s accurate policies duo to it is very difficult for merely depend on the personal to individual countries and individuals to address. Personally, i disagree with the view expressed.