2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

可增加从句和复杂句的使用；文中词汇表达较恰当，高级词汇表达灵活；文章层次较为清晰。

The past several decades have witnessed significant changes about environmetal policies, environmental scientists, state workers and the residents of a city draw attention to the environment related policies. Some scientists assert that we aresink into poverty-stricken which environmental problems can only be solved by government,s accurate policies duo to it is very difficult for merely depend on the personal to individual countries and individuals to address. Personally, i disagree with the view expressed.