2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

可增加从句和复杂句的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累。

The past several decades have witnessed significant changes about environmetal policies, environmental scientists, state workers and the residents of a city have already draw attention to the environment related policies. Some scientists assert that we are sink into poverty-stricken which environmental problems can only be solved by government,s accurate policies duo to it is very difficult for merely depend on the personal to bent on success