2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

高级词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇量稍小；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒。

There is no denying that solve the environment issues is vital for draw up relation with public policies.The environmental- related issues, for instance climate change and ozone depletion, are not confine to some countries overlap the whole countries. Thus with the joint efforts of each country through law down the environmental policies to come to the top