2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；能较灵活地使用高级词汇，希望能改善用词单一的情况。

There is no denying that solves the environment issues vital to draw up relation with public policies. The environmental- related issues including climate change and ozone depletion and so on, are not localization to some countries but coverage the whole countries. Thus with the joint efforts of each country through law down the environmental policies to come to the top