单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;多多注意文中错误的句子。
I have a good friend. He name is Sakyamuni Buddha。 I love him . He is a man do anything for others ,never hope return. I hope ,one day ,i weill get a person like him. Do anything for people. Though, i can not do it ,today,but i am trying to do like him. I hope i can become a person like him early.