单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
I have a good friend. His name is Sakyamuni Buddha。 I love him . He is a man to do anything for others ,never hope nothing return. I hope ,one day, i will get a person like him. Do anything for people. Though, i cannot do it ,today.Now i am trying to do like him. I hope i can become a person like him early.