小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多。

Jim has a big family. His father is a teacher. His mother is a nurse. Jim has a big sister,she is a beautiful gril. She always go to school from Monday to Friday. Today is Sunday. Jim's family are giong to have a picnick. They prepare many things for it. So. hope they have a good day.