小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少。

Jim has a big family. His father is a teacher. His mother is a nurse. Jim has a big sister,she is a beautiful girl. She always goes to school from Monday to Friday. Today is Sunday. Jim's family are giong to have a pinic. They prepare many things for it. So. hope they have a good day.