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I have a nice clock. It's pink。 Its has two hams. One is long, one is short. Its usually calls me at 7:00. Though ,i want to get up. But i must do or i will be late to school. Today is Sunday i needn't get up at 7:00.But its calls me at 7:00 as usual . I get up and found todya is Sunday.Then i colse it , go to bed,again.