多多注意文中错误的句子;上下文衔接手法不熟练,没有能够有效的使用衔接词;作者词汇量偏小,且文章中拼写错误较多。
I have g busy day. I get up at 6:30. First, i help my mother do houst work, i wsah dishs. Second, i play pingpang with my classmates. Then, i watch TV at home. Thouth, today i do so manythings and feel tired.But i am happy. Because , I stay with my mother and do somthing she want and i can do something i like.