2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；很好的运用了从句，但部分句子稍有瑕疵；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累。

It is universally acknowledged that environmental policy especially in modern society play an important role in the country,s long term development and programme. Although the broadcast all over the globe , the minority indeed takes some actions intended to develop practical and workable precaution as problems before they occuring .This essay aims to explore the underlying factors contributing to this phenomenon and what we can or should learn from this policy case study