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Generally speaking,life is the most precious thing for us.But how can we spend our life?make it siginaficant or just waste time in the whole life?In fact,it is a normal problem about how should we us our life time?A anicite proverb saying:"The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it."Is it a truth? As time goes by,some regartful feelings come into our mind.When we waste time and doing nothing a day,we often tell ourself that I will cherish time tomarrow.However,we make the same thing in another day.How it happens?Is it we good at plan but poor to practice?either-or.The most question is that we did not chasing the meaning of life.Everyday we communicate with others,take part in some activities,put our life in many meaningless things.Evenythough,we can take it as a way which we enjoy our life.But we will achieve nothing at the end. Just as the proverb,the greatest use of life is to spend it for your idea,dream,your grail,and then take practice.Nothing but you make effort to your dream,you can achieve success and make the greatest use of your life.
