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Generally speaking, life is the most precious thing for us. Nevertheless, how can we spend our life? make it siginaficant or just waste time in the whole life?In fact, it is a normal problem about how should we us our lifetime? A ancient proverb saying:"The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it."Is it a truth? As time goes by,some regretful feelings come into our mind. When we waste time and doing nothing a day, we often tell ourselves that I will cherish time tomorrow. However, we make the same thing in another day.How it happens? Is it we good at project but poor to practice? either-or. The most question is that we don not chasing the meaning of life.Everyday we communicate with others or take part in some activities, put our life in many meaningless things.Evenythough,we can take it as a way which we enjoy our life. But we will achieve nothing at the end. Just as the proverb, the greatest use of life is to spend it for your idea, dream, your grail, and then take practice. Nothing but you make effort to your dream, you can achieve success and make the greatest use of your life.
