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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；作者词汇量偏小，且文章中拼写错误较多。
The online commitition can't make people face to face In this picture parent are talking with there chirld to eat food onling,but absolutely there chirld are just on the stairs.With the techonolgy improve the people more and more increase talking face to face,but also chat online.teenagers don't care about there parent,just enjoy there own world.With the time goes by ,they are relationship will less and more
