2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；从句使用稍显不足，注意个别句子错误；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

As the technology increase developing more and more people to use the electrical product,mobile phone play a important role in people's life. It takes positive and negative aspect for our life;first,we could use it to check email,call our friends online,read news.The negative side we spent too much time on it,sometimes when we take the bus or walk on the road we often use it.So,we should take an appropriate attitude to sue mobile phone.