2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了。

It is not advisable to draw a conclusion for what you see and what you hear instantly,when you present your opinion ,everything should be considered into, because what you present may cause a serious problem. Taking yourself in deep thoughts must be a right choice when you want to make a instant conclusion.Firstly,both what you see and what you hear may not true,if you express your opinion at right way,you may do somebody wrong.However,something happened on others may differs from you,if you view it at your angle, it just your feelings instead of others.Last but not least,you before you give an expression for what you see and hear,you should be sure the validity of that,if it is just a joke or it is not true at all,your presentation may lead a panic as well as do harmful to others. Therefore,do not draw a conclusion instantly,everyone should be responsible for what he expresses,so pay attention to your words so as to avoid the hurt on others.