增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,对拼写检查也要重视;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
Lihua is my good friend. She is a gentle girl. She has two big black eyes, and has long hears, and has a red mouth. She likes smile. She said smile was the best language. She likes read book. She knows very very knowledge. She is good at communication. She usually help me wirte homework. I like this friend.