2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

To start with, the practice of government may lay down environmental policies in order that limit public mis-action. Moreover, every country could keep up spending on research and technology on environmental aspects. For instance, government may encourage scientific research are aim at designing automobile that producing no pollution. It is not only government enact a precise policy to figure out about environmental issues, everybody tried their best to keep in mind that protect the environment , it starts from me.