2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累。

Beyond question,although there are many barriers to prevent the implementation of policy.Initially, duo to be short of professional knowledge require to settle the problem like global warming as well as water and air pollution which need much research and investigation,s aspect knowledge to reduce the environmental impact. Subsequently,if emergency or abnormality occurs the happening personal behavior within their limited scope cannot responded to immediately.For example,floods and earthquakes things like that outbreak,if people have no idea to the related knowledge,they will head above water and are destroyed by the environment.