2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

Nowadays,when people tell about the technology most of them would occur the point of computer.And there is no dying that the development of computer is the symbol in technology's region. But,there lies another fact is that computer is created by our humans.In another word,the humans' brains is more powerful than anything!It is obvious that computer is working for human,it was controlled by people.Moer over,people don't have to do something that instead of computers.So, we should thank to the scientist. Finally,computer is so strong thant they can do something what people can do but need a plenty of time.And,human can tell them how and what do.